was less than desireable. A better ending would have made this flash much better.
Keep up the good work
Length and substinance need to be improved. But unlike most people's first flashes that they submit, yours is not an abomination.
Just like what zachtejeda2 said. The actual series will be longer. And thanks. i really hate people that make scribbles and then try to pass them off as "good".
Could you clarify something
Great animation, it's short and funny, but in the part where it shows the close up of the guy in grey wacking something, is he wacking his wood with the plank? It looks like it.
I really liked your style. I was expecting a joke about ash after he got incinerated. Nice work.
This flash really made my day. The mental image that you have provoked made me laugh.
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